How to Grow a Poem

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"She is of the frozen people"

"She is of the frozen people"

Carmen Calatayud on her poem, "Mother's Hips"

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Kenneth Salzmann
Sep 23, 2023
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"Mother's Hips" by Carmen Calatayud may be a compact poem--nine two-line stanzas and a "longer" one that stretches to three lines--but packed into it is a multi-generational legacy of pain and trauma.

Specifically, Calatayud said, it's "a surreal snapshot of how [my mother] was always dying during her life, in one way or another."

To put her mother's prol…

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